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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-06-22 03:58 AM


" Tell Me "

Tell me what it is I feel
Tell me why I feel unreal
You see I am frightened of life
You see I am frigtened of Strife

Tell me what it is I think
Tell me of my missing link
You see I am terrified of you
You see I am terrified of feeling blue

Tell me what it is I see
Tell me the way that I should be
You see I fear things unseen
You see I fear things mean

Tell me what I want to hear
Tell me that you'll always be near
You see I am afriad of whats above
You see I am afraid to be loved

Tell me what it is I need
Tell me what my self will feed
You see I am scared To know
You see I am scared that you will go


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miriam
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1 posted 2000-06-22 01:50 PM


thanks for sharing this with us whiskey...it really is beautiful..i can really relate.

miriam coronado



whiskey
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2 posted 2000-06-22 08:23 PM


Thanks for replying Miriam  
JulieAnn
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3 posted 2000-06-22 08:26 PM


I can totally relate to this....so much fear of what you are not sure of,,,,Liked it much thanks for sharing!!!  

Julie :)



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