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Dom Mart
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since 1999-08-17
Posts 164
Florida

0 posted 2000-06-11 09:13 AM




Pages of The Wall Street Journal
Are flapping in the breeze.
A laptop barely balances
Upon her stolid knees.

A cell phone at the ready
Will link her to the latest deal.
She's sitting here, al fresco,
Waiting for her mid-day meal,

Which is not exactly lunch;
Nor is it dinner either.
It's a sort of you know, kind of
Gustatory breather.

Sitting still to eat a meal
(And savoring what you chew}
Is something she's just too,
Too busy now to do.

So let's leave her at her table,
She'll confirm what she's there for,
When she adds up her portfolio--
That's her way of keeping score.

© Copyright 2000 Dom Mart - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-11 11:16 AM


~Ah,..so true in your observation.  Well penned thoughts on this one.  Great poem.  Makes ya think.  Thanks for sharing it. Take care. *Peace.
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
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2 posted 2000-06-11 03:55 PM


Too often a sad tale of this busy life ... well presented Dom Mart!

Best wishes,
/Kit

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
3 posted 2000-06-11 05:46 PM


I hope you don't mind me mentioning "American Psycho" it is one of my favourite books. The character in your poem
inhibits a similar world to that of the main chararacter in the book. A sterile controlled way of life seems to be the fate of people on wall street.
sorry for ranting, a wonderful poem. excellent observation.


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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

manic street preachers
"Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair"

"I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP

"And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity
Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see
And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway
It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper.

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