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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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The peace within us is set forth through our love and our desire It exists in us because we openly choose to set our hearts free and cherish what we share This is a gift of life given for our purity in trust for one another It is bound in us deep within allowing us the pleasure of truth Mark Bohannan |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ Welcome!  I really like this poem and will be looking for more from you! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Mark, welcome to Passions. Lovely poem! Are you asking for suggestions for a title? By the way, please check your email for a special message!  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sea and Poet deVine. Thank you for your welcomes and comments. Poet deVine; Yes, I would appreciate any title suggestions. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice piece of poetry!! It flows soo well, with out being rhymy!! Enjoyed this very much!!!!!  Welcome to Passions!! Bridgette< !signature--> "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Mark, welcome to Passions.... a wonderful start you have made here... title eh?? what about "The peace within".. regards and enjoy your stay here, Sudhir |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Welcome to passions...I enjoyed your poem very much.....so much meaning in just a few words.....  Julie :) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"What Is Here" springs to mind as a possible title. Welcome to Passions, sit back, relax, read, comment, and get inspired [although from the looks of it, that won't require much...we are all well on our way to enjoying your future works...] Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are my hearts gift my dear one... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Mark, what a wonderful first post! Your style and sentiments are just lovely ... Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading many more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thank you to all of you. I was surprised to see this come back up. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Come on, Mark - Put a title on this baby !  How about 'Cherish' ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
belated welcome to Passions,Mark! this is certainly a very strong first post...dig the positvity within these short stanzas |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge- I will and I think I am leaning towards one already. thanks for reading kaile--thank you and I am glad you liked it. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Welecome to the world of Passions Mark. I like this piece and look forward to reading more. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
kitkat, thank you and there are a few here if you wish. |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Very well put This is a nice piece Keep up the good work |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Well I for one am very glad to see this was brought back through...things move so fast here that missed it! This was excellent writing Mark, free, hopeful and beautiful~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lady Web-- thank you for the nice reply and glad you liked it. BDC-always so nice to hear from you and your sweet words. Glad you liked it and yes things do move fast around here. Nice that they are all saved. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This flows really smoothly in both tempo and thought - good work, Mark |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
LngJhnAg--thank you for the reply and glad you liked it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And I cherish ... 'The peace within us is set forth' 'This is a gift' 'It is bound in us deep within allowing us the pleasure of truth' ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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