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One Syallable. . . Parker's Challenge. . .
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One Syallable. . . Parker's Challenge. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Love seek Love find Ever you On my mind Heart touch Hand hold With you Love not told Eyes see Soul know For you My heart glows ------------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
LOL  neat poem...neat challenge...one question though:isn't "ever" supposed to be two syllables?or is it because of our different speech patterns?well done, Sven...moi will take you on this challenge  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sven, well done....but I think kaile is correct. But who's really counting anyway. Great poem. and Sven it wasn't a real challenge, just a off handed joke, because you did so well with the other poem. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Challenge very well met! Well done Sven Marina It is blessing to have wings for your words, and passion to flow from pen. Marina Crossley |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oooh I liked this!! Challenge met here!! Bridgette"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
OKAY!! OKAY!!! So "ever" is two syllables!!! SHEESH!!! LOL And Parker, I know that it really wasn't a challenge, but I thought that you had a great idea, so I thought I'd take you up on it!! Kaile, waiting for yours. . . Marina, thank you my friend. . . Justbleu, thanks!!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ My friend, you rock, you roll, you fill my soul. When I have one small need, Sven has done a good deed. You do what some do not ... take a note at what you wrote. You are cool and no fool. I wish you would teach school. I had fun with this Hon - now my work is all done ! When it comes to a neat trick Sven can do it oh, so quick ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
A good try at a good uhhhm cha llenge  Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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