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Two forms
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
In two forms evil grows One of dim One of glow One moves fast The other slow Each of which Consumes whose Home. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
Very thought provoking....I like it alot!!! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
This is great, to say so much in so few words, It speaks to me of fire and Ice, I love it Thankyou Olias |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I liked this very much. I am always impressed when poets are able to say so much with so few words. Your poem made me think. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
thank you all for your kind replies. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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