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The faded carving on the tree... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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People were drawn into the square Like moths are drawn to fire A scent of spring was in the air The spring itself was higher And walking down the dusty path The memory comes back again And once again I hear your laugh And once again I hold your hand And once again I see your face Reflecting in the cup of tea And then dissolving into space I’ve kept that space inside of me I’ve kept your laugh inside of me I’ve kept your face inside of me... The faded carving on the tree Words... “+AK forever friends” Whatever happened to “NT?” Has nature lost its common sense? Did time forget about us? This isn’t true; it’s all a lie Imagine sky without the stars Imagine stars without the sky The sky is lit and stars seem bright Reflecting in the cup of tea They slowly fade into the night I’ve kept that night inside of me I’ve kept a star inside of me I’ve kept your light inside of me... Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Master~ I like this one very much!  -SEA |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you SEA! Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Master, Very wonderful I LOVE this too. This is a KEEPER my friend, thank you so much for posting it here. Love, Cerenity |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A wonderful poem Master. Really enjoyed this. Sounds great when read aloud. ------------------------ "WE IRISH ARE TOO POETIC TO BE POETS, WE ARE A NATION OF BRILLIANT FAILURES." Oscar Wilde. "A rock pile ceases to be |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
thanks! Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
very good poem,,,memories fade and so do we. it is so true. Julie :) |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ahhh tis true, memories can fade away. Like the ocean steals the sand from the beach.. *sigh* this is a goodie ~Heather |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear master, this is beautifully, sadly touching... i know all too well the feeling of having a friend slip away... your pen betrays too well the secrets of the human heart... sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I believe I can somewhat relate to these thoughts..... Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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