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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-06-18 12:09 PM


“I love you” always sounds so trite!--
I’ve lost my faith while seeking reason!
But then, I saw you there, that night,
Right then I knew, -- my heart’s imprisoned!

What fate could render you such grace?
Your fragrance spreads throughout the hallways!
One day, I’ll talk to you, and dazed,
I’ll say to you, “I’ve loved you always!”


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Check out my poetry here:

http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet



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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-06-18 12:13 PM


Lovely...just lovely...

There is nothing like an 'I love you' truly meant.


Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 2000-06-18 01:31 AM


Thank you Severn, I just wish that it was meant more often!

Check out my poetry here:


http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet


Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
3 posted 2000-06-18 02:49 AM


Beautiful.  

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"



Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
4 posted 2000-06-18 08:03 AM


Thank you!

Check out my poetry here:


http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet


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