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menage a demideux
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0 posted 2000-06-17 09:50 PM


je vous aime
que je m'ennuierai de vous apprécie
sois heureux qu'un dieu vous bénissent
la vie est tellement très courte


-menage a demideux

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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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1 posted 2000-06-17 09:57 PM


So, true - life is short -

Lovely

merci

~netswan

Teresa King
www.tipsfortop.com


menage a demideux
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2 posted 2000-06-17 10:12 PM


rampe demain et demain et demain dans ce jour petit de pas par jour jusqu'à ce que tous nos hiers soient allés

merci, teresa
adieu

Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2000-06-17 11:17 PM


I'm afraid I need a translation before I can comment on the poem but I do want to welcome you to Passions!!
Menage #1
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4 posted 2000-06-18 12:01 PM


Have Dessert First..

..

kat
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5 posted 2000-06-18 12:57 PM


Aimez chaque moment de tous les jours
parce que la vie est sans aucun doute tres courte.

Merci pour cela

Kat

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6 posted 2000-06-18 01:07 AM


Easy for you to say, menage!!!

(and you say it so well  )

menage a demideux
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7 posted 2000-06-18 03:13 AM


Allow me to effect a little loose translate.
The poem, she says:

I do care for you.
I will miss you and find life boring now.
I am happy you have joy.
Life is so very short.

The comment from my writing is a Shakespeare wording. "Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow
creeps into this petty pace day by day
until all yesterdays disappear to gone"

Please forgive poor badly talked English language.

merci, mes amis

(menage #un...do you mock? this dessert you say? what is this?)

bon.

au revoir.  je suis fatigué.


[This message has been edited by menage a demideux (edited 06-18-2000).]

dreamy_eyes
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since 2000-06-17
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8 posted 2000-06-18 06:33 AM


Great poem life is short so make the most of it!  I'm a new member 2 so do me a favour and check out alphabet of drugs in the open poetry cos I've had no replies!  Doesn't matter if u don't like it!

Debbie  

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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9 posted 2000-06-18 06:33 AM


Comment allez vous mademaselle demideux.  Merci beaucoup pour de magnificant French poetry.   "Sois heureux qu'un dieu vous benissent".  Anyway I really liked this part.  Please forgive my loose translation of the French language....if you don't do the next one in English I'm in trouble....au revoir.... James
menage a demideux
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10 posted 2000-06-18 11:56 AM


aha! Mon amie Menage #1... zee little birdie she told me the explantion de la plaisanterie!

"la vie est courte, ont le dessert d'abord"

or my small translate from weak English...

"Life, she is short. Eat the dessert first"..

you are zee most humorous of le trois menages! Merci du laughing!


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