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The Aftermath |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Alcohol numbs my mind yes, what said was unkind hard tones from my tounge cut her up so deep Now I miss her in my dreams of my sleep. No one to cuddle no one to kill the alarm no one left to charm emptyness my foe. Head in my hands lead in my heart just wish we could have a fresh start Miss you now you have gone no one to call my number one don't you cry don't dispair I will always be there I married you for love I took the oathe of trust yet we shattered both with lust We are both wrong beyond the realms of repair I beg in dispair take me back girl. -Rich- ps. will anyone have this lonely poet.  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It hurt to read this poem so much. Good luck Rich. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Rich,...this is so full of sorrow. By reading your work, I see into a broken heart, broken soul. Like I said,...even your screename kills me. Ouch. Keep letting it out. Take care. *Peace. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So much pain and emotion in this Rich ... I hope the writing is repairing the slash in your soul ... well done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rich~ Ouch...I could feel your pain deep in this one..Hope your writings help to heal a slashed soul Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Again, I thank you all for reading my poems, It is true that my heart was broken, and while my daily life is normal and happy- the times alone make me think..... -Rich- |
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