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*passion-fruit*
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since 2000-06-09
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0 posted 2000-06-16 11:17 PM


I'm sitting in this car
We haven't gone very far

Cleaning it at last
It's about time
It smells like she passed gas
Or maybe it's mine

Tic Tac wrappers on the floor
Oh someone please open a door

There's no hidden message
No meaning to this at all
I've just been very bored
Sitting in her car



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Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 661
Tennessee
1 posted 2000-06-16 11:21 PM


Hmmm...I don't know if I should feel amused or sad.     Very entertaining read either way.  

 --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.--

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