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Angel`Fox
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 32
Ottawa, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2000-06-16 01:03 PM



Heaven

Heaven is so close to my reach
I want to go to its warmness
I want to be wrap up so tight
In it's loving embrace
I feel it way down deep inside
This is were I belong
Heaven is where I want to be
My soul aches to be there
My heart tells me no lies
My body wants to intertwine with it
As I curl up in the darkness
All I think of is heaven
I feel it calling me from a far
Saying, come to me my sweet
I am waiting for you
I want to be with you too
Come fly with me to the stars
It will be a treat for you and I
Come my love come with me
Leave your fears behind
And come to heaven in my arms…

Angel`Fox
1:02pm
June 16, 2000


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()~*~()
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"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"


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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-06-16 02:01 PM


a lovely poe, it a wondeful moment when you feel a sense of completement. really enjoyed this poem.

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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde


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DONALD
Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 10

2 posted 2000-06-16 02:15 PM


ANGEL FOX,
HEAVEN... I KNOW THE FEELING. IT'S VERY GOOD FOR YOU TO HAVE THAT THOUGHT. HOPEFULLY SOMEONE WILL PUT IT TO USE.

Angel`Fox
Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32
Ottawa, Ontario Canada
3 posted 2000-06-16 02:18 PM


Thank you both for the lovely comments!!
and Heaven is just a heart beat away for Me
I just have to leap and grasp it!!
*smiles*  

 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
_( Y )_
()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"


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