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~His Way With Words~...for all the romantic poets whose words make us ladies swoon... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~His Way With Words~ With in your words ... contentment found, of your offerings ... my intrigue bound. Immerse me in your sensual depths, baptized in the surrender ... I am sweetly swept. Seduced by whispered subtle pleas ... enchanted by your grace ... your poetic expertise. Anticipation replaces longing and resign ... fascination born of desires design. Drawn into your poetice reprieve ... elevated by the words ... passion conceived. Captivated by cryptic confessions, entranced by mystical obsessions. Allow your poetic cascade to wash over me ... the beauty of your words shall set me free. Janet Marie **thanks for the *sighs* guys  *repost from open 6 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Janet Marie! So beautifully said ... big sigh ... excellent writing!!! It has been quite a lot of fun reading all these romantic gentlemen's thoughts, this is a very lovely tribute to them!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Nothing like a handsome poet's words, to lull you into sleep...(sometimes that sleep is likened unto death though!) *nervous laugh* Girl, you know as well as I do, how divinely dangerous it can be to allow oneself to become so vulnerable to their words. You almost feel like a helpless lamb.... This is actually a very beautiful tribute though. It's nearly breathtaking. You are certainly getting good at writing with emotion! Keep it up!! Hey btw, I finally posted something in Adult to shush you up, so I expect a thorough reply!!! ROFLMAO  |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Nothing more should a real man want but a woman who can appreciate what a man does for her....and you my lady are such. This is so well spoken of such and I bow in its giving It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a wonderful poem Jan, well if romantic words make your heart flutter I better dig out those meg ryan videos again and the box of chocolates and get writing lol Captivated by cryptic confessions, entranced by mystical obsessions. Allow your poetic cascade to wash over me ... the beauty of your words shall set me free. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah lassie, yer tuggin at me heart strings don ya know. Tis a fine piece of poetry you've written. Spoken from a true lassie's heart right down to the very marrow of a lad's bones. Yer so darn beautiful and soft all of ye that ya make all us laddies act like school boys and we want to write to ya to steal yer heart. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I've got me a bottle of rum and a good B-movie to see lets drink untill were drunk and sing these poetic harmonies. Janet, you honor us so, so lets drink and sing to the romance of the bold. Parker |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
Janet, What a wonderful tribute to all those romantic poets out here.....they deserve this !! I hope they feel the flutter of souls when they read yours, just like the way we feel when we read theirs !! Regards, shilpi |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Perfectly written!!! You speak for us all here JM....  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you all kind gentlemen so glad you enjoyed ... as I sure enjoy you. take care jm |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Thank you Janet. If just one of my poems makes you swoon (or faint even) then the effort is all worthwhile. later-appreciative-gator SS |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like I like...almost better than oatmeal Hope all is well with you my friend |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very nice as always Jan! Marina |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I do so agree wholeheartedly!! Nice Tribute!! Bridgette |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Gentlemen, please take a bow For Janet M is right You pull the very tender heartstrings In the middle of the night You choose the words that so enchant And soothe our weary souls And then you mystify us with a tender Loving hold It's all that we can do to make it through all of the lines So tangled in a web of lure that nothing else defines You ask if I enjoyed the poem, was I a bit confused I said , my dear from that first phrase, I was totally seduced Keep it up guys, Your writing is terrific And you Janet Marie have written an apprpriate tribute Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Much thanks to thee Lady Janet *bows* for this wonderful tribute to the Brave Knights of Passions. . . whose words made us swoon and stand in utter amazement at their talent!!! Great poem!!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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