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peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA

0 posted 2000-06-16 10:20 AM


Life is a hard road to travel
Full of bumps and detours
Surprises and disappointments
Joys and sorrows
At times you stumble along
Not quite sure of your direction
Feeling all alone and in the dark
And then your path merges with a friend
As you meet, that sudden knowledge
No longer alone, no longer afraid
The road is now neither bumpy nor dark
And in walking together, hand in hand
Your journey becomes one of joy
Let's walk together always, my friend
Together, until journey's end.


 Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

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notlikely2
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since 2000-06-16
Posts 308
UK
1 posted 2000-06-16 10:57 AM


Nice one Pepermint!
I know exactly what you mean about life's journey. Sometimes it's hard...but always worthwhile.

 Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you!

JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
2 posted 2000-06-16 10:58 AM


very good poem...life is definitely full of obstacles..itdoes help to have a friend to see you through...


 Julie :)

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