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Angel`Fox
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since 2000-05-20
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Ottawa, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2000-06-16 02:15 AM


My light

I see the light
It is oh so bright
I reach for it
Try to touch it
I feel the warmness radiate from it
But can't seem to reach it
I want to touch it
I want to embrace it
I want to close my eyes
And loose myself in it
I want to hold it close
And never let it go
So close, but yet so far away
I want it, I need it
Can almost taste it
Tears fall down my face
Will I ever have it?
And be happy forever?
Only one knows
I love you my light

Angel`Fox
2:03am
June 16, 2000



 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
_( Y )_
()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"


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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-06-16 02:20 AM


very uplifting poem keep up the good work yuh
notlikely2
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since 2000-06-16
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2 posted 2000-06-16 05:38 AM


Inspired!
I truly hope that you find your light Angel.
It is wonderful when you do.



 Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you!

Angel`Fox
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 32
Ottawa, Ontario Canada
3 posted 2000-06-16 02:21 PM


Thank you both!! and I know My light is not far away and I need to grasp it soon!!
*smiles*

 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
_( Y )_
()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"


DONALD
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since 2000-06-16
Posts 10

4 posted 2000-06-16 02:46 PM


HEY ANGEL'FOX
MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU, AS YOUR THOUGHTS DEVELOP... SO WILL YOUR NEEDS AND YOUR WANTS
WILL JUST BE A MEMORY....
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK....

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-06-16 04:49 PM


Keep stretching, you'll reach it very soon I am sure!! This is a lovely poem, so very uplifting. Thanks for sharing.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Angel`Fox
Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32
Ottawa, Ontario Canada
6 posted 2000-06-16 05:30 PM


Awwww Thank you!! I shall grasp it and keep it forever!! :P

 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
_( Y )_
()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"



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