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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
this is my second time posting in open, but no one really read my last so i posted a new one. hope you enjoy. thanks. if only i wasn't caught in this web of feverous laughs if only i could escape my mind full of dreams caught in masks of decieving faces none to understand my hands cannot write enough for words come shrewdly fast in veiled outer insainity my tounge ever silienced with whips and deadly scorns beating within my chest my legs enveloped by a blender of emotion unable to dismiss the wild shake that recks in a bitter fashion my lips drawn to silient motions for things that should not be kindly said have exited the innermosts of me my heart in fear of losing a friend i never truely befriended and never could have comprehended [This message has been edited by Ron (06-25-2011 10:02 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is ponderous, but a compelling read for me--I could relate on many levels to this. Thank you for the read. |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
An interesting poem. Certainly made me think. Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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