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lost and wanting... |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
I was lost when not embraced by your arms you stole my heart with your charms I never knew how deeply I had fallen in love until I hit the bottom. laughing, crying, flying along with you our love thicker than glue Beg you on my knees claw at your door Look at me baby, tell me you don't want me any more. Advice from the gods go for gold thrown away what I was told Laydown the rules born to be true I want you. Planets turn, worlds collide we fought side by side looking forward feeling free you are my oak tree. -Rich- |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
"I never knew how deeply I had fallen in love until I hit bottom"...this is so true, Rich. Expressed very clearly. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Syntax Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 25 |
You've done a very good job of expressing your feelings of lost love. As it happens to so many, you didn't realize it was there until it was gone. Very sad, but know that there are a lot of people in the same boat. Syntax Each instant comes with a price ~ J. Wright |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This poem struck a chord in me,...for relating just isn't the word. Well written expression. Thank you for sharing. *Peace. |
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