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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-07-28 09:46 PM


Frustration surging

Flowing through my veins
I try to resist the hook you bait
Trying to run away.

Anger spouting

Growing stronger.. larger
Close to reaching out of control
Trying to calm myself.

Hurt stinging

My pride taking the hit
I defiantly hold my head up high
Trying to hide the pain

Regret showing

My heart sorrowful
My eyes shining with remorse
Trying to plead with yours

Alone again

My soul stumbling
The frightful loneliness spreads  
Trying to consume me



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EagleOne
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1 posted 2000-07-29 10:32 PM


I'm afriad I can't offer much in the way of a title. I like your work though, you stired some powerful emotions!

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



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