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It only takes a spark.
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It only takes a spark. |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
It only takes a spark, to get a fire burning. It only takes your love, to set my heart on fire. And when that fires burning, everyone feels its warmth. A warmth which is felt deeply as it is on the surface. How long can I keep it burning. A day, a month, a year? What fuel can I use to burn. Perhaps my love? Perhaps my affection? Perhaps my distance? I am so far, yet feel it's strength and beuty. It shall never burn out, It shall never be dulled, It shall burn for as long as I am here with you. Let the light shine forever. |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Very nice wording and very expressive! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I agree...stoke that fire!  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Great writing.....and when you figure out what keeps it burning........let me know  I enjoyed the way this flowed and the message within the weave, Thank you for sharing this~ |
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