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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Opening Heart Loving Mind Tender Voice Love Sublime Arms Warm Holding Strength Eyes Speaking Soul Gazing Hands Joining Spirits Together Love Always Spending Forever ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sven,...what's up? This little poem of yours kick butt!!! haha. I love it. Love the format,...love the heart smiling words. *Peace. *BTW...just noticed it's my 700th....and a great one indeed to bless it with. Thank you for the pleasure. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 06-15-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 What a beautifully simple poem. Very heartfelt. I loved it. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
This is beautiful. I love writing like this. I do it sometimes and a friend will say...but where are all the words?  Glad to see you also know that all those 'other words' aren't always necessary. Nice. Romantic. Did you show it to her? MagnoliaBlue Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*My Skipper Jim, I love you! Your Lady June*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And I thought all the good words taken--smiles to you me sveet---flowed like summer rain... |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Sven, Well said, in so few words. An ability I am thus far only envious of. I shall watch and hopefully learn! Trew. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I L I K E I T T O O ! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
King Sven Knows Well What Words Flow Swell Love Romance Happy Joy Irie's Favorite Passions Boy (Man) Hey Svenster....Pinching those dimpled cheeks again. This was soo cool! I just adore it! Very well done Sir Sven ~Sheri |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Sven This is wonderful , I love to write this way also , So much can be said with so few words great poem Julie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven a wonderful poem, very enjoyable read and the format tops. TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven winds romantic clock Tick Tock Tick Tock ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sven... when using the word processor always set the margin to more then one inch.... Great poem.... now your next challenge is to do this in single syilibles.... Parker |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A most wonderfully romantic poem in such a beautiful format ... nicely done Sven! Best wishes, /Kit |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Amazing how much can be said with so few words... Excellent work Sven |
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Syntax Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 25 |
Poetry Romanticism Penning Perfectly Love Great work, Sven -- Loved it! Syntax Each instant comes with a price ~ J. Wright |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven sings songs soulfully Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderful poetic beautiful. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, you are a true romantic, why can't all men love like you?! This says so much in few words. Unique, creative, beautiful!Please share more with us, us women are swooning over you Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I believe the word for this poem would be "Perfection" at it's finest. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
WOW!!!! You go away for the day. . . WOW!!! Thank you all. . . Spitfire, thank you so much and Congratulations on your 700TH!!! Temptress, thank you so much. . . Magnoila, thank you. . . sometimes the simplest things are the most wonderful. . . serenity, the good words aren't taken. . .there's always some more to be found. . . Trew, welcome my friend. . . you shall indeed learn much here at the feet of some of the best poets in the world!!! Looking forward to seeing more from you. . . walt, t h a n k y o u !!! Irie, *OUCH!* LOL not so hard!!! Thank you my friend. . . whiskey, thank you. . . just trying out some new things. . . tracie, Thank you!!! Marge, when does the alarm go off?? Parker, can you show me how to do that?? And I accept your challenge sir!!! Kit, thank you. . . sea, yes it is isn't it?? When the heart speaks, the soul listens. . . Syntax, thank you!! Sunshine, only way I know how. . . brian, thank you. . . Melissa, yes, I am indeed a "Born Romantic", but all men can love like me. . . they just do it in different ways. . . and please don't swoon over me. . .*blushes*. . .I'm not the swoonable type!!  ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, pure poetry here It outreaches the heart in every verse! I love it Coco |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
Such emotion with such little words. Lovely! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Hi,Sven,I always likes your poem very much. Enjoyed this poem very much. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven.... Simple and sweet poem you have written my friend. I like it a lot. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Treasures find me when I read your words, Sven. Very nice, my friend. ~ Claire |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all for your replies. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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