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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-07-24 02:01 AM


Can you come out tonight?
Play with me under the moonlight?
Can you feel me breathing you in?
Tell me this isn't a sin...

Can you hear my thoughts racing of you?
Are you ready for what I want to do?
Do you want to get know me better?
Do you feel what I feel?
When we're together?

Does the night get you lonely?
As it does me?
Suffering in silence
Needing to be free

Does the morning sun
Bring you back to reality?
Do you know all I am offering is me?

Do you think you could
Stay all night?
Get carried away into the twilight

Does she know?
Does she know that's it's me?
Will she ever set you free?
Does she care what your doing till dawn?
Did she tell you that's she's long gone?

If I lend you my house key
Will you come to me?
When the nights get cold and lonely?
Stirring desires awakened by the night,
Desires that are too strong to fight

Forgive me if I'm out of line
I'm just working on making you mine
Do you remember how it started?
Couldn't believe you standing there staring at me
A smile playing on your lips
Me, on the dance floor shaking my hips
Daring you to say what's on your mind
I could tell your the flirtatious kind

Can you say your happy?
Can you dare to try to be?
Can you hear me calling your name?
Can we do this with no shame?

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Julie    






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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-07-24 02:34 AM


"Can we do this with no shame?"  love bears no shame...its not an emotion you ask for it just is.

never say never

T McCoy
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 186

2 posted 2000-07-25 12:32 PM


    This is great...I love the way it flows.
  Ever write any songs?    Tony
                          

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-25 01:41 AM


JulieAnn....

        This was great reading...I agree
   with Tony about the songs............

            I like this one!!!!


Love received is equal to love given!


MysticalNights
Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
4 posted 2000-07-25 02:18 AM


Wonderful work here.  Have pondered many of your questions myself.  Loved the read!
JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
5 posted 2000-07-28 11:38 AM


Paula~~~ Tahnk you for the reply.....but what if it isn't love??/ Or even emotions....Just having fun????  

Tony~~~I have written a few songs....I love music and sngs are an interest of mine....I do have a couple posted here.....Thank oyu for the reply......  

Thanks Sunny~~~ You are too kind....  

MN~~~I love your work so I appreciate your reply~~Thank you.....  

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Julie  




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passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-04-22 07:54 PM


good questions
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