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redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2000-06-14 03:27 PM


I
soddend
and grey eyed,
impended by winters grope,
was returning eternity
to afternoons
found marvelous, and
laughing soft.

© Copyright 2000 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-06-14 03:37 PM


This just made me FEEL GOOD, redheart--you really captured a healing essence with this.
I like your style.

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
2 posted 2000-06-14 03:38 PM


Your thoughts never fail to give me pause ... there is much said in the not-saying.

--Kess


 YOUR LIFE IS A TEST

It is only a test ...

If this were your Actual Life, you would have been given better instructions!


ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-06-14 06:52 PM


Great escape here I really enjoyed the quick fix.
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
4 posted 2000-07-10 03:50 PM


i'm really glad that this was a good feeling poem, thank you all,

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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