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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Today is mine to mold The key to the future Is here to hold Time now to be bold I control my destiny Mastering the ability to dream Of what will eventually be When the sadness finally flees My days will be filled With efforts to warm A heart that's been chilled Which you almost stilled I take control once more A lighthouse on the bay Leads me to the shore From which I was torn No where left to turn On this another day Lessons have been learned My heart has been burned Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Lone Wolf, even though you've been burned in this piece, one can see that the hope lives on... I like this...well done! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Burn and ROAR  Excellent writing L.W.you are working things out well....sunshine soon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
we learn them all the hard way dont we LW.. but your getting there... every new day.. every new poem stronger and wiser take care sweets jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Lone Wolf! I can feel your strength building in this verse as I read ... light at the end of the tunnel there is. A powerful and optomistic pick-me-upper! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jen~ Hey! This one almost got by me....I love it! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jen...I know where this is coming from...and I know where you are going isnt gonna be easy...but I am here for you always never say never |
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jefsand Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 18 |
I liked this! There's always tomorrow! jefsand |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Lone Wolf, I came a looking for you and found a nice surprise. I like this a lot. My days will be filled With efforts to warm A heart that's been chilled Which you almost stilled I take control once more A lighthouse on the bay Leads me to the shore From which I was torn This is great, 'almost stilled'. I can see the contrast of emotions in this bit. Linda M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ You said it all my dear - 'I control my destiny' Yes, you do .... and forward you go ! Warm wishes and *hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine . . . There is always room for hope. Thanks for reading. BDC . . . ROAR, thank you my friend. Sunshine is in the future for us both. JM . . . I seem to learn everything the hard way. Yes, strength and hope are growing with each new day. I will try . . . you take care too. Kit . . . Thank you. I feel the power!! LOL SEA . . . I know how that goes. Happy you found it and liked it. Paula . . . Thank you my friend. Jefsand . . . Yes, always a tomorrow. Thanks. Linda . . . You found me!! Thanks, yes, there are many emotions. Marge . . . Hi there!! Forward I go into the future. Thanks for the support my friend. **HUGS** Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know how that feels. You get lust for trust and you lose but the real heart lives on in a better world I believe. This is very good Lone Wolf I could feel the hurt. Good work! |
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Kathryn Miller New Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 6 |
Lone Wolf you are not alone. Don't despair as another day comes things get better. Find the light that you mentioned and follow it. When it grows dim look into your heart and soul where it still shines. Keep writing your dreams. Put that lighted path in words so that it my shine on our paths also. Thank you for sharing your feeling. Kathryn Miller |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love to see your strength building. Keep that fire burning and use it to grab the world. See ya at the top my friend....Great read with a mountain of promise. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey Gurl,...this is so good to read. Well,..good in the sense that you show the move forward and such. (Not the burned part,...blechhk). Lessons learned, and taking control,...Right On!!! Reading this got me all pumped up and mighty feeling. hehe. Awwwesome you. Be well. *Peace. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ethome . . . sorry you relate to this. Yes, the heart does live on. Glad you enjoyed it. Kathryn . . . Welcome to Passions!! Thank you for the kind reply and for reading. We are never really alone when we have friends. I will always share as long as I write. Mark . . . Thanks, the world is mine!! See ya at the top my friend. SpitFire . . .Always a pleasure to make you mighty my friend!!! LOL. ROAR!!! Thanks for the reply and yes the burned part is bad, but necessary to move on. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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