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Forever's Gone- haiku
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Forever's Gone- haiku |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Forever's Gone - Haiku We said forever. Flowers felt the sun today; Our union did not. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Perfectly painful Jamie~ |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Prometheus~ this is amazing.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ohhhhhhhhhh J... tell me how three lines can bring the tears to my eyes hey? Simply beautiful Hugs my friend. K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Prometheus, Excellent. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ Oh, my ... this is so well done ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jamie, Great haiku. Speaks volumes. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
We said forever. Flowers felt the sun today; Our union did not. ~~~~ Tomorrow brings light, A shine to feed and nourish. The spirit will rise. such a wonderful haiku, jamie... just beautiful ~~softly Maureen |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie, this is simply beautiful, really tugged at my heart. Great work my friend *hugs* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
so sad...Why did you have to make me cry!!! so much power behind so few words! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely haiku A lot was said Liz |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully heartwrenching. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey Jamie... I've missed these little gems of yours.. this one is jewel of emotional metaphor so very well done take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
WOW |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Few words, much said. Very nice. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
You've said enough....I wish I had read these words a few weeks ago.....few words are sometimes better then many....well done!!  Julie :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
In a moment my friend. . . Excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jamie.... This produced a tear........ ~~~Never say Never!~~~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
aaaaawwww brown eyes how I wish I could write like this never say never |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
BDC--Any tears lately?????--lol SEA-- Thanks for the kind words. Kamlee--because you are so sweet??? Seymour- Thank you Marge-- And Thank You too. Lone Wolf-- Only to those who listen...(like yourself)..thanks Thanks for sharing yours Maureen!!! Thanks Maree you are just too sweet!!! hugs back at ya Romantic Heart-- I am sorry-- it is because it is soft--lol Liz-- thanks, it means a lot coming from you. Mark--thanks again JM-- you are kind as always Kaile--aww gee whiz--lol-- looking for more from you as well. Thanks Marina, I appreciate it. JulieAnn--- then I wish I had written them then...8-) Thanks Sven,, You are most generous and kind. Sunny1-- Here-- take my kerchief....--and thanks Paula-- you remembered----lol..thanks Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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