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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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0 posted 2000-06-13 10:37 PM


desire
betrayal
empty pages
from an acient script

we've been here before
yet do we not learn?
the essence of tomorrrow
never on our minds

we think not of consequences
only living in the moment
we ought not blame eachother
for our passions promise

did we really think
we meant what we said?
there is irony in our secrets
as we lie naked on your bed

did i whisper to you?
i can't quite remember what I said
was it the rambling of desire?
is it something we will regret?

the fires flame reached my toes
did you put it out?
i am floating over you now
in my eyes only confusion shows

i'm trembling
please hold me close
too scared to let go
i lay here as if froze

we're walking a tight rope
will you fall with me when I do?
we're keeping our eyes shut tight
letting nothing shine through...

the night closes in on us
too late to go home
so i'll stay here in your arms
wishing for something more...

tenderly you tell me
that i should leave
i feel your breath on my neck
as i refuse your plea

holding onto this moment
i tell you just a minute longer please
give me your heart
i'll treat it with care
for in your arms
i have nothing to fear

so the sun is rising
i know i must go
as i watch you laying there
the time has come
yes it is now
i've got to tell him
i just don't know how

i never thought
a new love
could come my way
i always thought
with him
i would forever stay

but then you came
into my life
touched me so deeply
i wish it was
without a price

maybe it was destiny
that brought me to this place
i haven't got the answers
as i look at your dreamy face

i won't wake you
i'll leave you for now
maybe i'll see you soon
yet i don't know how......


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Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-06-13 11:30 PM


WOW! this was awesome girl.
torn between two people...ahhh don't
i know that feeling all too well...
brought some memories of my own up
from another time. excellent
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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