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In your arms
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In your arms |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada 
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In Your Arms Exhausted from a day Both stubborn and long I come to you Weary And older than my days I lay my head upon you Close my eyes And welcome myself home. The rhythm of your breathing Caresses my soul Your scent, warm and delicate Wraps around me And whispers I love you Your heartbeat carries me Toward that secret realm Of memories and dreams. You reach for me Silently A fingertip brushes against my lashes A thumb sighs across my cheek A touch as soft as your love. Without a word, you say goodnight And I fall gently to sleep In your arms. |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Lovely and romantic. Keep writing.  MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Trew...... Let me be the first to say that this is very, very beautiful. This is what we all should be able to come home to....... Excellent writing...... Your words become music to my soul...... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very beautiful poem....just to imagine feeling like this....it happens all to little....loved your poem.....  Julie :) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Trew, Sigh . . . this was breath taking. Truly beautiful and devoted writing. She is one lucky lady my friend. Excellent writing. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Trew...I do not know how I missed this one but I am glad I went on search today. This is heartbreaking in its story. We all need a love like this to come home to, and Im glad you have it.< !signature--> never say never [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Trew* This is a beautiful piece..yes we should each have this to come home to and when we don't only then do most of realize just how wonderful it is~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
SIGH |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Trew! Reads like a sweet and romantic lullibye ... just beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
such an easy read, Trew ... flow, flow, flow ... nice. |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Thanks so much everyone! This poem just kind of poured itself out onto the paper. The easiest, I think, I have ever written. I agree with all of you that everyone needs to feel this kind of love and even those who do, sometimes don't realize it. Oh, and Lone Wolf, I am the lucky one. Thanks for responding everybody, it means a lot! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Exquisit writing. To be able to come home to this would be sheer delight. You have penned a beauty with this one. |
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