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Pressed Between Thoughts |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Pressed Between Thoughts I lay between the pages of your thoughts. Eyes traveling, line by line searching your world for a hint of me. Slipping from one page to the next I breathe with your words, feeling alive again. Inked in memory that first kiss, taken by surprise. So light, so tender, raising an awareness of the attraction to each. But that second one, ahhh that deep kiss, that pulled from all the senses and fed the hunger craved... I felt the burn, once again, the intense fire, as your thoughts curl around me. Pages comforting me, heating, nourishing my need for you. Pressed between your thoughts, of all you have held back, I begin to scribble in my own diary of this unspoken exchange, giving me new purpose for a tomorrow. M/M 7*2k |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
MMoonchild.... This was a unique work of art...... You have a way of expressing the romance....soooooo good!!!! Your words become music to my soul...... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I really loved this...beautiful...mm--thoughtful and I enjoyed your analogies...well done. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Are you having fun ???? Yep, I knew you would.  This is a lovely piece. Thanks for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
MMoon, this is the first thing of yours I've read....it won't be the last. You have some wonderful lines here....this is excellent. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is an excellent poem Maureen I really enjoyed it ... more than once |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A most delightful piece of poetry...just wonderful to read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
MMoonchild, a truely beautiful poem wonderfully written. "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Excellent writing here in a poem filled with beautiful memories and thoughts. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I don't know if you are the same M. Moonchild that I have encountered before but I can say this you write with the same style. This is an excellent romantic poem. Great arrangement of words. E. Lewis True |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully romantic and passionate sentiments Maureen! Beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Wow..I am still trying to figure out how to respond..next time I won't let so much time pass... Sunny1...thank you for your lovely words they brightened my day serenity...sometimes those analogies just happen..and not too often with me so I am pleased you enjoyed. Marge...what can I say ..to find your words here is a joy ~~soft smiles Balladeer...thank you for stopping to read and for enjoying my lines..*w Rex...I love when once is not enough..although it could mean you didn't get it the first time 'round (thanks *s) tracie66...thank you for your kind words *s Brian, Lost Dreamer and Kit...I am running out of words of thanks...your visit was most appreciated and to you my friend... E., yes 'tis I, who have found my way here through a kind pied piper name of Allan...how greatful I am to him for showing me your lovely home site for poetic passions... to all of you, please be patient with my responding as I am trying to figure out my way around here ( I know there must be easier ways...to do that *s) Maureen/Moonchild |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Maureen, you're very welcome! I've been reading your poems and they are even better than I first imagined... Allan  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
what a kind thing to say Allan...you make me feel so wonderful tonight... thank you {{hugs}} Maureen |
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