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My Heart...........
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My Heart........... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Come here, look into my heart.... Take a peek, it's free.... It's all I've got to give you.... It's the biggest part of me.... My heart is always open.... There's always room for more.... I've rid it of the clutter.... From it's ceiling to it's floor.... My heart's a better listener.... Than my 2 ears could be.... It hears when love comes calling.... Then it sneaks it up on me.... My heart has x-ray vision.... It sees without my eyes.... But when my heart gets broken.... I feel the tears it cries.... My heart produces laughter.... It gives my face a smile.... It takes away the worried look.... If only for awhile.... So, I will give it to you.... Be gentle----treat it kind.... No, I won't really miss it.... For what good's a heart.... Without a mind!! (from one insane poet to another) My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I loved it. If only everyone could learn to open their hearts as you do. Very well written. Thank you for sharing. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
IsGona....... Thank you so much!! and....... Welcome to the family here, you're gonna love it.. My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Attention all Passions Shoppers: Sunny1 is just my twin but she is sure to win all of your hearts on over as you stand in her sweet clover for she is gifted well of verse from her you won't hear nothing worse than the very best, I know and with this tribute, I shall go... You certainly remind me of others here...and that is a great compliment indeed, trust me... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
My Sunny twin...... I am so honored right now by your words......I can't do more than say a humble thank you. I've wanted to share with other word-wizards ever since I was about 5 years old, and only you know how long that would be! Your words and encouragement are close to my heart....... My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Your heart has much to offer. I hope the one for whom this was written realizes that also. Great writing!!  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Bringing a little sun to our forums, I see...  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
As always, a beautiful read and I just adore this! So sweet and romantic.  You have a wonderful heart, Sunny-one! Gossamerwings ;) |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Sunny1....how do I reply to this..mmm...this was so very sweet...You obviously have a large heart. I hope someone is in there and treating it well~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Lone Wolf.... Thank you for your kind words.. Sometimes those closest to us are the farthest away.... Nan..........Passions is the brightest site on the net....I'm just glad I found it finally!! Thank you so much for reading this, too. Gossamerwings..If I could make you smile, I am happy!! Beth.........Thank you very much....I always enjoy hearing from you!! ~~~Never say Never!~~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, This one almost snuck by me. What a very meaningful description about a "heart". I'm continually impressed by your writings. |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
This was a great write Sunnyone. Yeah, I know it was written a long time ago, but I am just checking out the archives and I came upon this one. Great job |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your loving heart shines with true love in these gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) May the mind of your heart always feel the beauty and trust of true love forever! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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