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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma 
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The way you .... ~*~LiLOnE~*~ The way you took your hands Placed them on my sholders Let them roll down my arms And kissed the top of my head Made my heart race 1000 times faster The way you would sit next to me And just stare at me with an adoring smile Made me feel like I was loved And like I was something special Like I was needed.. The way you took my hand Kissed it, and looked in my eyes Told me for the very first time Three words I will always hear you saying "I Love You" The way you took your hand And slowly graced it upon my face Lifed up my chin, softly kissing me Then holding me tight As my heart continues to race The way you do Everything you do Is just the reasons Why I love you... And I will always be Your little one  [This message has been edited by LiLOnE (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Hey LiLOnE, That's some good writing! There's someone pretty special in your life, I can tell. Hold on tight and don't let go! |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Very very AWESOME poem... The way you wrote it was wonderful... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful read. Welcome to Passions. Your joy leaps of off the page in this and is so nice to see. |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Trew- Thank you... yeah there really is and don't worry I wont Cuddelz- Thank you I am gld you liked it.. it came from the heart Mark B- Thank you .. I am excited to be a part of this ... It seems to be a wonderfull thing! I am glad you all like my poem! I will have more posted soon! ~*~LiLOnE~*~ |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Lilone Very nice. I am glad there is someone else out there as happy as I am!! Keep working at it. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is really neat, Lil One... I'd like to see more of your work - Show me - Show me...   [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Notlikely2- Thank you hun.. and if you have thoes feelings too thats wonderfull!! They truly are the best part of life! Nan- Thank you much I will continue to post more poems!!!~*~LiLOnE~*~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Lil* How sweet this is...I could see each scene played out in my head, superb job of imagery! I enjoyed this piece very much~ |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Butterflys_Dont_Cry Thank you hun : ) I am glad you like it.. I can still remeber that day like it was yesterday: ) and i'm glad you could see it in your head!!!! Thanx again.. ~*~LiLOnE~*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I didn't realize this was a submission, Amy... You've got my vote - and I hope it wins a spot in the book - It's a very nice piece of work.. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so sweet! Welcome to our family! Please check your email for a special surprise!  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LilOne~ this is soooooo sweet! Know the feelings here, great poem! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LilOne~ Enjoyed this little piece of your heart. 'Made me feel like I was loved And like I was something special Like I was needed..' Now that's the way love should always feel. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Nan- Thank you so much!... I didn't realise it was submited for the book either though????? Do you think I should???? Poet deVine- Thank you so much!! I enjoy being here very much!! Thank you for the card to! Your too sweet! Sea- Thank you so much hun What can I say it came from the heart!!! And I'm glad you know the feelings.... Thanx againMarge- Thank you so much Yeah I guess it is I just wanted to let you all know I love passions and am very happy to be a part of it!!!!!! <3 ~*~LiLOnE~*~ |
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