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*PrincessJameY*
New Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 2

0 posted 2000-07-14 07:50 AM

                  just to feel your breath
                  on my face
                  both of us have waited and waited
                  just to gaze into your eyes
                  just to feel the warmth of
                  your body
                  i would be fully elated

                  this feeling burning
                  so deep and alive
                  is ripping me apart inside
                  the way i feel, the way you feel,
                  we know it's true
                  the one thing in this world
                  that i want,
                  is to be with you

                  i've never felt this way before,
                  somehow you have opened a door,
                  within my heart
                  within my soul
                  you have complete and
                  total control

                  so far, yet so close
                  so real, yet not completely
                  you're all i need and want
                  so not to be blunt,
                  i simply love you

                  everything about you
                  seems so right,
                  sometimes i wish
                  you would come steal me
                  in the night
                  then all  our troubles
                  would vanish
                  and while you carry me far away
                  i say

                  " i love you"

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

1 posted 2000-07-14 03:56 PM

My first love felt somewhat like this... I was swept away much to my delight. Nice first poem to post

)

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

2 posted 2000-07-14 03:57 PM

My first love felt somewhat like this... I was swept away much to my delight. Nice first poem to post

)

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

3 posted 2000-07-14 04:10 PM

I gotta say I know this feeling very, very well

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

4 posted 2000-07-14 04:14 PM

Very beautiful. well done.

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