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Impassionata Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 26Alberta,Canada |
So much I need to give Love from deep within Emotions higher than the sky take flight from in my soul and I lose all control One look from his clear blue eyes A lazor beam to my heart tears well up inside and spill from my eyes Not tears of sadness, oh no! but love and ardent desire One touch of his hand and fire burns in my heart It heats from inside out until my flesh is hot This desire and love I feel he understands not How my soul yearns for his to connect with the deepest kiss Yet even though he understands not, my yearning I love him all the more I will forever wait and love him everyday someday, I'll hear him say He needs and wants me too In the same way that I do. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions and if this is a taste of what we can expect then we are in for a real treat. Enjoy, browse and greet and for our sake indulge us with more of your creations. Really nice read.  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautifully expressed. I, too, believe that we all have soulmates. Welcome to Passions, and I look forward to more poems by you Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Impassionata Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 26Alberta,Canada |
Thank you so much Mark and Melissa. I am really new to this and I don't know how to use this site very well. I will enjoy discovering everything that is here. I have finally found a place where I can express all I feel with others who feel the same. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Passions!!! You have made a beautiful entrance here with a lovely poem. Nice writing!! Looking forward to reading more of your work. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Welcome Impassionata, I'm a newbie too and the folks here are just tremendous talents ... Very supportive and helpful ... Loved your poem ... Fav line ... How my soul yearns for his to connect with the deepest kiss Thanks for sharing ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. |
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Impassionata Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 26Alberta,Canada |
Thank you lonewolf, I already feel very welcome on this beautiful site...... Welcome to you too then MA Miller! I agree that there is tremendous talent here. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this as I have recently experienced many of the same feelings and desires...I know when someone says they will wait forever surely they must have found their soulmate but perhaps the soulmate has not found them yet. I have found the one that I think is my soulmate and I sure as heck wish she would find me...it may sound funny but I will not wait forever for her...but I will wait a reasonable period of time...it is not that she is not worth waiting for...it is only the thought that perhaps she is right and I am wrong...maybe she knows that I am not her soulmate...so why wait a lifetime if I have chosen the wrong one? I think about this kind of stuff a lot...Take care...James |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Welcome to the forums. You have a real treat in store...and from this entry, so do we!! Love is like the mumps.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
These are some powerful images you have working! To feel with that intensity and not have it readily returned is heartwrenching. Welcome to Passions! If all of your poetry affects me as this has, I am in for a good ride! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS, Impassionata... and have a nice stay here... your first post here is absolutely great... enjoyed reading it quite a lot... relax and enjoy here at the family of friends... regards, sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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