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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-07-13 07:29 AM



Streams Of Life
~*Marge Tindal*~

Sometimes yes
and sometimes no
I wander where
the stream does go

Splashing through
it's current flowing
I merely follow
where it is going

Knowing that I can't
stop the flow
I merely follow
where it does go

I rest sometimes
among it's banks
and take a moment
to give God thanks

For just the chance
to have sung
the songs of the stream
from life's well sprung





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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-07-13 07:36 AM


Excellent Marge! This painted such a
lovely picture in my mind ... me thinks I'd
like to frame this one please???    

Beautifully penned Marge!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-07-13 07:40 AM


Kit~
Ooooooooh ! I've been 'framed'.
Love it !  And thank you for the compliment.
Yes !  Of course you may.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Bill Charles
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3 posted 2000-07-13 07:44 AM


Marge,
What a beautiful walk by the stream, searching for wherever it goes. Very nice and very gentle.

Sunnyone
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4 posted 2000-07-13 11:00 AM


Marge....

      I love your writing......it leaves
   such happiness where it touches.
   This poem is lovely....

            Never stop..........


My heart is an open book
....take a look....


Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2000-07-13 11:16 AM


AHHHHH.. a nice cool refreshing dip in Marge's stream she so graciously shares.  What a great way to approach the afternoon.

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-07-13 11:21 PM


Bill~
Thank you. I like 'gentle'.

Sunny1~
I appreciate your thoughts.
Oh .. me stop ?
Definitely not ! Thanks !

MarkB~
Thank you, love.
In this Florida heat -
I'd have loved that stream myself !  
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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