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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-13 12:47 PM


From visions that tangle
And hearts that mingle
To become what we may
The difference we make this day
Of love we offer to you and me
That which we lost we try to see
The hand in hand so we give
To love again, to love to live
And thus this path we find
The path we conquer and climb
Tis for love and life we fight
And love comes back, it's second sight
To know this that my heart beats
For foolish games can now depart
The answer be known to all
That we are one and shall not fall
That my heart beats true for you
Tis all my love given true.

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-13 01:30 AM


These words do speak of treasures.
Very nice

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-13 11:08 AM


Tis for love and life we fight
And love comes back, it's second sight
To know this that my heart beats
For foolish games can now depart
The answer be known to all
That we are one and shall not fall
That my heart beats true for you
Tis all my love given true.
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tis very lovely words thou poets pen
has written...
they touch thy heart and thine soul
(or something like that) LOL
beautiful Michael...very nice read
jm




There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
janet mari

Martini
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-07-13 11:10 AM


Beautiful writing as always Michael!!  
Keep it up

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2000-07-13 12:00 PM


Michael.....

        Your words are beautiful, gentle
               on the soul.......


My heart is an open book
....take a look....


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