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Open Poetry #8

That old rainy spot

ShOrTy
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since 2000-07-12

Posts 6
falMOUTH.MA

0 posted 2000-07-12 11:39 AM

I look to the ground and I notice once more
The ground is quite moist, I've sat here before
I look back to see yesterday is so far
Not knowing, what tomarrow, may have in store

It's rainning today, but what else is new ?
This place always serves that quite hurtful stew
What could I have done that would keep me from this ?
But no, there wasn't a thing I could do

You would not believe it unless you were here
Returning one day was my ultimate fear
That dark lonesome place called "That old rainy spot "
Where it pours 365 days a year

I should not be here, but somewhere we choked
It is my conclusion that I was provoked
But how does not change that this rain hurts so bad
I stand here alone and I'm thoroughly soaked

I wish everyday, that we had not fought
Should I let this slide?? No, I cannot
And now I can see where my safe haven lies
It is here, alone, at "That Old rainy spot"

Benjamin Charles Way

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2000-07-12 09:19 PM

Gotta love those rainy days - and this poem is my favorite of yours so far... I'm looking forward to more...

Sylvester
Junior Member

since 1999-11-11

Posts 16

2 posted 2000-07-13 07:13 AM

I love rain too, alone or not..

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-07-13 07:23 AM

Lovely imagery Benjamin! Very nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2000-07-13 10:43 AM

ShOrty.....

Loved this one!! I live in the middle
of a rain forest, and this poem really
said it like it is!!

Nice Job.........

My heart is an open book
....take a look....

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-07-13 11:50 PM

ShOrTy~
A most enjoyable read.
Welcome to Passion's family of poets and friends.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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