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The ABC's Of Loving You
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The ABC's Of Loving You |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
The ABC’s Of Loving You Adoring from afar Begging to touch Caressing each other Dreaming of such Exciting together Fantasizing of you Giving myself Holding you too Intoxicating in everyway Joining two hearts Keeping you with me Loving this thirst Moving in synchrony Needing of love Offering of souls Pampering of Quivering in ecstasy Relishing in the fire Surrendering completely Trembling in desire Unleashing the hunger Vowing to never part Wanting of eternity “X” I have no idea what Yearning for some more Zing!! What are we waiting for?? Ok so the end was a little off But what do you expect with X,Y and Z If anyone has any ideas how I could have ended this Please enlighten me!  [This message has been edited by kat (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Xanadu that's you Yearning for completion Zion made for two. okay, okay, that's my two cents worth...but methinks ya didn't need the help....like this much, very creative... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This was sure ingenius. I really liked it alot and it seems like rules of play for love. Nice going. |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Serenity: Me thinks your two cents was GREAT! I didn't have a clue as to what to put for that. Thanks! Oh! One more thing I forgot to mention. It has to end with "ing".  Glad you liked it! kat [This message has been edited by kat (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Mark: You sneaked in on me. lol Well you got it! It seems of rules of play for love is right. Thanks for the compliment! Glad you enjoyed it! kat |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Very clever and well written, I have no ideas for x, y and z, I can't think of anything, what you thought of at the end is way better than anything I could ever come up with Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Melissa: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and who knows, someone may just come up with something. We'll see. kat |
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Linzi Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35Pennsylvania, USA |
Wow, I like it! Very creative approach...and I like the ending just how it is ;o) ~*~Linzi~*~ "Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
X is for X-citing or X is for xxxooo !  I love your poem and it ended just great! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Linzi: Thanks I'm glad you liked it MagnoliaBlue: That's great! I think x-citing fits perfectly. I'm glad you loved my poem. Thanks! kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Xylophone is the music of our love Yes I do Zygoma for children OR Xeranthemum that blooms Yank off the covers Zzzzzz get up you're on top Great idea kat Nice read |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Xylophone music, very romantic Yes I like that one too Zigoma Huh??? I haven't got a clue?? LOL. I had to look that one up and I still say. Huh???? lmao! (scratching head here, I think you may have to explain that one. It's either that my brain has given out or there's something I'm not getting..lol.) As far as the Zzzzzz goes, It's very unlikely that I would fall asleep during that.lol I've got to admit, I loved the suggestions though. LOL Enjoyed your reply insect. I'm glad you like it. Thanks! kat [This message has been edited by kat (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Asma M. Ahmad Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 19 |
Xquisite sensations Yearning for more.... Howdoes that sound? I think the last line is perfect .It has a differant tone from the rest ,and it makes you smile.It's like...that's enough talk let's get down to business!... Looking forward to reading more Best wishes Asmoon "..Infinite passion and the pain of finite hearts that yearn." Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ Zis is You Xactly ! Adorable ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
That is a great style of poetry I absouletly loved it! i have no Idea what xyz can be =) ~EroseGrover~ [This message has been edited by EroseGrover (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
What a wonderful way of presenting this ABC of love...well done ( can't think of anything for xyz) sorry Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Asma: Thanks for the suggestions but I wanted to make it even more challenging for me so I made every word's ending "ing". Your words are great. As far as the ending of the poem that's exactly what I meant. "Ok enough! lets get cooking!"..lmao! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks! Marge: Zanks! You is X-tra sweet!! EroseGrover: Thanks I'm glad you liked it. As far as having any suggestions, I just put that in just in case. LOL Actually even though I didn't find a word for X it didn't bother me. I just worked the poem around it. Tracie: No need to be sorry. I put that in for fun and just in case anyone thought of something. I was curious to see if there was anything I could have used. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!! kat |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
X cellent work, You've done very, zstupendously, I enjoyed this very much . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Tom: Thanks! I love your creative response and I'm glad you enjoyed it. kat |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
X For the thoughts I have You is what makes me complete Zenith for you are the Zenith of my Love. Great work Kat!!! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Dakota: X I love those thoughts You are in all of them Zzzzzzz Don't fall asleep! lets make them real! Thanks! I love that! I'm glad you liked it! kat |
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