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Mother Of The Seeds
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Mother Of The Seeds |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Upon the rolling hillsides, beneath the drifing breeze, in creaking scented greenwoods with whisper spoken speech, on meadows sleek and oiled, on trails from field to sea, the soul imbibes connection to mother of the seeds. Her soverign gypsy wander, her flight path like the wind, from golden grass to rivers she brings her own to blend, with pollen threads of vision committed to extend, her spreading through the offing the kindred of her femme. Her past imbued with annals of old forgotten times; her future full of promise and undiscovered rhyme; and she has lived tommorrow beyond the evil crimes, forever grand and flawless to greet the light devine. In spirit servant showers come washing her release in colonies of wonder within her precious keep. Through hail and snow she ferries on stalwart goals to greet the soils of verdure foilage grand mother of the seeds. Celtrue2000@E3B1G9 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Upon the rolling hillsides, beneath the drifing breeze, in creaking scented greenwoods with whisper spoken speech, on meadows sleek and oiled, on trails from field to sea, the soul imbibes connection to mother of the seeds. Her soverign gypsy wander, her flight path like the wind, from golden grass to rivers she brings her own to blend, with pollen threads of vision committed to extend, her spreading through the offing the kindred of her femme. -------------- Her past imbued with annals of old forgotten times; her future full of promise and undiscovered rhyme; and she has lived tommorrow beyond the evil crimes, forever grand and flawless to greet the light devine. -------------- exceptional ethome... such beauty and grace of imagery such perfection of rhyme... this just danced as I read it wonderful writing ...exquisite take care kind poet jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, this is wonderful and I enjoyed it very much... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ This is just an awesomely amazing piece of work. We are all that has blown before us - 'the soul imbibes connection to mother of the seeds.' WOW ! The musings of the spirits are alive and well. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Janet Marie, Sunshine and Marge your fine comments are greatly appreciated. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Ethan! Exquisite flow and so descriptive ... just stunning! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank-you so much Kit for dropping in, I appreciate your input |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow, this is beautiful...what a lovely flow it has...  K |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Severn I'm glad you enjoyed. |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Dreamy words Loved it very much |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, beautiful...with imagery and flow! Exceptional Writing! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Nice melodic piece. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
oh, yeahhhh, ET - this is really great! I love the images and the way everything flows so well! This is really good stuff... vote? What do YOU think??? Of course it gets my vote!!! |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Voting of course... wonderful work!  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Lady Web, Martie, Prometheus, LngJhnAg and JP for you upbuilding comments. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This has such a wonderful teasing flow. I am in awe at the visions you are able to summon with your pen. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"Her past imbued with annals of old forgotten times; her future full of promise and undiscovered rhyme;" Great lines! Enjoyed this piece very much. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Mark and Doreen I appreciate your comments so much. |
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