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JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-06-12 07:35 PM


what does the future hold?
bright and beautiful for me?
or darkness on a dusty road?
or out on the stormy seas?

a fork in the road...
a turn in the tide...
a summers breeze blowing by..
whispering in my ear....

i am moving to another place...
sorting through the ashes
of a love that once was....
hoping to find where it went wrong....

it isn't scary anymore...
through my dreams I will survive....
we've shared so much...
now it is my chance....
to begin another life...
to start a new dance....




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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-06-12 08:09 PM


JulieAnn~
Wonderfully positive poetry.
Get up on the dance floor and BOOGIE !
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-06-12 08:09 PM


JulieAnn~
Wonderfully positive poetry.
Get up on the dance floor and BOOGIE !
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-06-12 08:20 PM


Wonderful message here...a great way to look at life..move on! Listen to the band and dance!  
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-06-12 08:21 PM


We seem to have some burps in the system now..

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 06-12-2000).]

SpitFire
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5 posted 2000-06-16 04:22 PM


~"A new dance"....I love that.  Hee,hee,..I just think that's the coolest way to put it. Good luck to you in your new shoes...Take care. *Peace.
Angel
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since 1999-07-02
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6 posted 2000-06-16 07:40 PM


A new dance, what a beautiful way to put it. Really enjoyed this one. Good luck  .

~Susie


 "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood"


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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7 posted 2000-06-16 08:50 PM


julie~
this was beautiful. i loved the
positive spin you put on this one.
great to see that you are ready to
begin moving on and looking forward
to tomorrow. i wish you nothing but the
best. take care.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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