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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Dreams Come True Girl, I love you so much now It would be hard to say good-bye You are THE ONE I've been dreaming about For all of my life And all that time I never thought My dreams would come true But, honey, now I know they have 'Cause I found my dreams in you All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sigh ... simply sweet and perfect Jeffrey, no more words need be said, except ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Beautiful, romantic, dreaming... Just the way I like it... Nice Work Jeffrey...  -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Jeff, this is soooo sweet! Coco |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
soft and lovely, Jeffrey! Corinne |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very sweetly simple. *sigh* If only it were that easy.  Lovely piece sir, just as I expected. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Sigh....so romantic and sweet as honey!! Keep 'em coming!!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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