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julietrose
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since 2000-06-30
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pennsylvania...

0 posted 2000-07-04 06:25 PM


Please let go of me
I want to be with another
Someone who is wonderful and always a sweetheart
I'm telling you it's time for us to part
I promise you this, since you never could-
He will surely treat me good
He makes me feel special, free and light
He comforts me on the phone at night
He tries to make everything all right

Can't you just break away?
It is impossible for you to stay
I'll love you forever and ever, just not in  "that" way
Our love is still true
I'll always be a part of you
But this is what I have to do
I'm asking you to let me fly
Don't ask why
and please don't cry
I will love you till the day I die

Goodbye




~love, JulietRose
-If I was Peter Pan, you"d be my happy thought.-"Do all things with love." -Mandino

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-07-04 06:48 PM


Juliet I felt this way not too many moons ago...and I knew there was nothing she could do to be with be again...it would never be the same...my heart was ready to journey on...James
julietrose
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2 posted 2000-07-04 06:50 PM


Thanks, its always nice to know that someone understand how I felt then.  

~love, JulietRose
-If I was Peter Pan, you"d be my happy thought.-"Do all things with love." -Mandino

Jeffrey Carter
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3 posted 2000-07-04 06:58 PM


Yup, been there done that
also had that done to me though   LOL

Great writing Juliet

julietrose
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4 posted 2000-07-05 04:14 PM


ThanksJeffrey  

~love, JulietRose
-If I was Peter Pan, you"d be my happy thought.-"Do all things with love." -Mandino

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