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julietrose New Member
since 2000-06-30
Posts 9pennsylvania... |
Your Love To be stuck in a romance lake, Waiting for you to awake From your long love sleep, Only to watch me cry and weep Your tears and mine form the sea we are drowning in It's your arms I wish to be laying in We've been through so much, why stop now Make love not painful, please tell me how It's just for the better, just wait and see You'll be much, much better off without me I'm sorry I wasn't everything you wanted me to be How can you ever, ever forgive me? I'm sorry for the pain I caused you I'm sorry that I thought you always knew: That I'm not that perfect girl, Not rare and precious as a pearl I'm sorry that I say all the wrong things at all the wrong times I'm sorry that I make up these stupid poems with ryhmes And out of all the things I'm most sorry for, The one I'm most sorry about is Giving up the one person I truly loved The kind of love that is never moved or shoved (But dear) I'm not sorry for falling in love with you, I'm just sorry that you didn't fall for me Just remember: Please don't frown, while I drown in your sea of temptation |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Julietrose~ Welcome!  Poetry isn't stupid, it's heartfelt......this is beautiful and sad. I hope to see more from you. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions JulietRose! What a lovely first post ... full of longing and heartfelt emotions. It's so easy to fall when someone places you on a pedestal, never easy to be "perfect" indeed. I hope happy days will come soon ... wonderful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have to agree with Sea...no poetry from the heart is stupid especially when it is from the heart. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Hope the wounds heal to shallow scars. Welcome to Passions. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I agree with the others, this is full of your pain...keep writing, it gets better if you can get it on paper. Please check your email for a special message!  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
yep, keep writing, your poetry is full of emotions and images, very nice, welcome |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Ok, I'm for once gonna disagree with everyone here  I don't think you put this line in ... "I'm sorry that I make up these stupid poems with rhymes" Because you think poetry is stupid , nope , I think you put that line there because you think HE thinks it is stupid  (of course, I could be wrong LOL)In any case, Welcome to Passions I think you'll find a lot of new friends here, I know I have [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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julietrose New Member
since 2000-06-30
Posts 9pennsylvania... |
Jeffrey, Haha, you were exactly right. I meant that line as in HE thought poetry was stupid, or at least he gave me reason to believe he thought it was stupid. Youpicked up on that one lol And thanks for the welcome everyone ~Love, JulietRose |
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LittleCookie Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 55asheville,NC,UnitedStates |
Welcome to the best place on the web!So many good people here!I'm glad this is about being strong even in the face of rejection-kudos to you! ~~Little Cookie~~ :*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Welcome to passions....Liked your first post. Oh and how I relate.....to most of it...and yes I thought the same thing as Jeffery, I knew what you meant...It is hard to please someone....anyone....But remember you can please some of the people some of the time...but you can not please everyone ALL of the time.....Chin up...it gets better....Trust me.... Julie :) |
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