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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I wish Put me down you wisiwig, Go away, What I Say Isn’t What I Get, I want her love, I want her smile, L want her warm embrace, And yet it wont go right at all, I’ll never unlock her case . I get depressed, You make it right, I feel happy when your near, I shed one lonely tear, Then more and more, They flow and flow, Even a tear can become one with another, Yet I can’t get close to that far . Oh why oh why, I want one thing, It’s all I live for, It’s all I ask, Please oh please, I ask, I know I should be happy, Then why am I so sad ? Written by Tom Baker . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I like the term - can’t get close to that far Very nice turn of phrase. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
How sad... Maybe you were deluding yourself all along that you thought you were getting what you wanted... Only when the finished product came about all the delusions fell down? Just an idea.... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Oh dear - someone needs smilies   PassionsThe tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh this is so very sad..I agree you need lots of smilies and hugs      is that enough NO oh OK      Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
thanks everybody I've made some major improvements to this poem, since posting it so I am going to re-post it again with the improvements, i think it is much better than this version . I appreciate the support . L.of.L. Tom . ps Debs - have you posted any new ones recently as I haven't seen them and you weren't getting to many replies before . - smiling .Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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