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jennie may*
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since 2000-06-17
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0 posted 2000-07-01 05:52 PM


my dreams
are thick

full of the residue

of me and you

I can almost
touch
days gone
that
come and go

come and go
in my
closed eyes

restless dreams

kisses that
will never be
kissed again

moments that
recreate
themselves

painfully
distorted


until I awake

tangled in the
thorns
that come from you

the celesial
memorial
in my heart





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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2000-07-01 05:57 PM


sadly beautiful
sparks memories of my own
thankyou
  
Rex}>{{{{o>


[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 07-01-2000).]

jennie may*
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 122

2 posted 2000-07-02 12:20 PM


thanx, Rex!!!    

"We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-07-02 02:49 PM


Beautiful and sad, Jennie May.
Bittersweet....
Well written!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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