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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Is it the night that brings the tears? exposing all your dreams and fears? naked trembling on your bed regreting all the things you've said cobwebs cluttering your mind sorrys never healed the hurt now your name is covered in dirt does it keep you awake? loseing sleep..... the pain that you just can't shake restless, your soul has abandoned you the stars not shining as brightly as they used to and the morning comes all seems erased no more pain have to get through the day pushing all the fears away fake smile plastered on your face going through the motions so much to attone for will you be allowed through that door? will they forgive you once again? will they give you another chance to show you can be a friend? so many people you have hurt with your powerful lies your tounge was quick to spread these things now mustering the courage of an apology don't bother saying it to me for I expected nothing less from you and my expectations proved to be true so I have written you off now a friend you'll never be I wish you no harm I only hope you can learn that you can't always get by on your charm someday all the things you've done will come back on you carma is a wondeful thing someday it will find you.... Julie :) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
paybacks are hell huh?  great poem J many emotions covered here.. well written and expressed take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JulieAnn~ this is great! There is only one person I know (thank goodness) that this sounds exactly like.....  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
the vibes you send out come back times three. good poem. i like the style of this one. and the payback theme has played more than it's fair share in my poetry of late as well. it's always nice to know that what goes around comes around. hey, did anyone else hum "karma chameleon" as they replied? just wondering.... oh and by the way, i liked the atonement part too. < !signature--> We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 07-01-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great thoughts here JulieAnn! I do believe what you send out, comes back to you tenfold ... it always comes back at em' one way or another! Wonderful verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Julie~ Excellent poem! Raw honest emotion displayed here. I am a firm believer in we reap what we sew. Great piece Take care. Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
'What goes around comes around, you'll see" Too true, JulieAnne! Great poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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