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Mystery of friendship
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Mystery of friendship |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Mystery of friendship What did I expect from you anyway and your zero tolerance heart? Perhaps just one small iota of a real life chance to feel like my hope and sincerity would have the slightest opportunity to reach out to your heart and possibly possess the desired key to unlock each and every mystery so I may enter the vestibule of your heart. Cause I really truly honestly would like to know if all my hopes and desires for a friendship will be lost within the mysterious chambers of your heart or will my hopes blend within yours to create a warm creative flow in which every precious beat of our hearts shall encourage our friendship to build and grow. Jameslee@June30,2000 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so beautifully expressed James! Truly genuine feelings come through in reading ... I do hope you find the key! Wonderful writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You always manage to express yourself so well my friend. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Kit and Marina I appreciated your warm remarks. James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I hope who you wrote this for is worth it as it sounds like He/She isn't being very nice to you. Great poem by the way!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, I hope you get the response you are looking for here. Powerful thoughts and words. Love the formatting too. Best Wishes, LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
.. the mysterious chambers of your heart .. James, the expression here is quite unique I liked the flow and how you speak From heart not mind The way it should be Most of the time  Coco |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea actually this is a woman I am falling in love with and if I am not falling in love I would like to fall in love with her....but at the right moment..and together...so we have had discussions on love and friendship and I have offered her a friendship and she is offering me a friendship and we'll see where the road leads..and right now I'm just sitting here watching the world go by...John Lennon. LoneWolf I hope I get the response I am looking for also..I love the way she held on to my hand tonight...and fool that I am I ask her if she would still like to work after we were married..and then I had to say oh I mean if we get married. I truly am trying for only a friendship right now but that doesn't mean I don't want her to fall in love with me. Thank you Coco this really did come from my heart and I am expressing frustration and desires...when you have already decided you really like someone you can only hope they are coming to the same conclusion..if not expectations can be shattered. We did both agree that love cannot be forced, manipulated, or rushed....I appreciate all the warm comments...James |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful, Jameslee. I truly hope you find the happiness you deserve. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lizzie I feel like this is my year..I hope this is the year...James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A wonderfully written poem, I hope that she did decide to let you in and share tha magic and mystery of friendship. excellent poem, James. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"the vestibule of your heart" ...so eloquently stated, James. I, too, hope this is your year. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Brian and Claire...me and Lena shared lunch today and talked lots of stories and our friendship is growing and I am very happy...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW James this is absolutely beautiful... a most tender and soulful poem...I loved it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Tracie for your wonderful comments...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It wasn't my year...James |
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