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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
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0 posted 2000-06-12 12:41 PM


appointments undone

Sometimes
things e’er work out like

you thought they should be things
are e’er as they seem look inside this
empty laced face see there’s nothing
here ‘tis just a waste listen to the
empty song it’s really not so

long it’s just been
repeated so

many
times
who wants

or bothers to sing along
to busy on the outside always
looking in there are e’er so many
breaks ahead constantly griping for
what paltry gained you know you’d
think that appointments wouldn’t
take the time or pains to show
itself just to exploit such

few refrains.



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

© Copyright 2000 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
MagnoliaBlue
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

1 posted 2000-06-12 02:51 AM


Lucky...
You always paint pictures with your words and I like that.   Great read here! Thanks!

MagnoliaBlue  


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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
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2 posted 2000-06-13 01:03 AM


m-Bleu

Interesting reply... I'll have to take a look and get back to you later on it.

(Lucky) Dale


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