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...so wrong?
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
... so wrong. Entangled in the bathroom I stare at the silence; peacefully she is craddled by the water she once drank. Her breath is empty like the air in a coffin as gentle ripples break over the moaning silence. Each step I take closer is tearing me part my heart turns a blind eye to the feelings I once had. My hands dare not touch what my eyes can see Her naked body is pale pain, and her lips have turned a deep blood blue. Shaking like a withered leaf my fingers kiss her lips my hearts erupts, and I scream in tears.... I have forever lost what I have hated for so long and now I left wondering, was I the one who was so wrong? |
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LittleCookie Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 55asheville,NC,UnitedStates |
Boy daniel,This is so deep!Such darkness!I think very well written,and with a lot of passion,something to think about. :*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Do you know Stephen King??? dark thoughts well expressed. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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