»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
She's The One
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
She's The One |
|
|
TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Her smile keeps me warm Her eyes keep me safe Her lips fill me with lust Her taste feeds my hunger Her body keeps me warm Her mind never puzzels mine Her love for me is immortal |
||
| © Copyright 2000 TrueLUV - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
trueluv~~~do all guys think like this???do i wish...this girl must be really special...sweet to think that girls make guys feel like this and vice versa...keep up the good work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
||
DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
I really liked this. Whoever this girl is, is pretty darn lucky to have a guy that cares about her like that! Keep writing.. ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
||
|
Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
how sweet!!! i could get all teary over those words...real love it seems you have bestowed, for your pen has written it in utter beauty...hope to read more, they are lovely! salooma |
||
|
lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
DO YOU HAVE A BROTHER??? Man, give me a boy who will talk like that about me and I'll be the happiest girl on the face of this earth! GREAT WORK!!  |
||
|
SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Awesome poem sweetie. jessica- |
||
|
Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
What a lucky girl to have someone who cares about her the way you do! And someone who is not afraid to show it, at that! Great poem, keep it up |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
