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Faded Feelings
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Faded Feelings |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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Those sparks that once caught aflame Now are extinguished in our pain Those tears that were once shed Now are used to put me to bed Those smiles that we once shared Now are smerks and left uncared Those momments that we have created Now are distant feelings and out dated Those talks we once had at late nights Now are torn into shreds of fright Those stars that we shared in the sky Now are like faded spots that don't spy Those feelings that once made me cry Now are vanished and don't come by Those countless nights that I dont talk to you Now are easier to forget about and get through Those things that used to be so real to me Now are faded feelings that don't drive me crazy ,.-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-., |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
This poem is awesome. You did a wonderful job. I hope you keep up the great work. Luv, Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Are you here? with me right now? ---- Are you sure? Well tonight I talked to my ex boyfriend who I lost my virginity to, and he told me that he is with someone, that absolutely broke my heart... This poem is great, Email me personally at sweetpoet17@aol.com, I would like to see more, check out my poem mirror of tears let me know what you think. -jessica- |
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mystique Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 22 |
This poem is so true to me. I hope you will be able to feel differently someday. Don't give up. I loved this. mystique |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Jeremy...wow! This is one piece of art! Great job....you're best yet and I'm glad to see you're dealing...it's awesome! Talk to ya lates... Salooma |
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