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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-08-07 07:38 PM


You say we're just friends,
But the cards say more.

They say you like me,
And have for awhile.

So many things the cards say,
You refuse to admit.

I know you like me,
And I like you too.



If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.


© Copyright 2000 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Chel
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since 2000-07-01
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Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-08-07 07:43 PM


Hey there
   I really like this poem.  Keep your head up, he will come around.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-07 07:57 PM


tamma~~~this guy seems like hes to shy to tell you how he really feels about you...maybe embarassed too if he tells you in a card...keep going for him girl!!!

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
3 posted 2000-08-07 11:47 PM


I have to agree seems like this guy is too shy to tell you he likes you. I think you should not give up he'll come around.

Jeanna  

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~


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