A Decision Waiting To Be Made

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Teen Poetry #3

A Decision Waiting To Be Made

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-07 01:57 AM

Tell me something is this a dream or are you really coming back to me.

The last time we had this discussion you left a hole in my soul and ran with my heart.

Tell me this why should I
How can I and why?
Should I let you into my world once more

If I were to I would just feel like evening the score, but that I cannot do because what you do onto others comes back to you.

Despite you hurting me once before never really meant that I closed the door, I still hoped you would come back and turn my life around, but all you did was bury my heart under the ground

[This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 08-07-2000).]

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2000-08-07 05:50 AM

your grouping was kinda odd on this one, but I really like the level of emotion and the rhythm....keep it all flowin hun.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Lone Insomniac
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 45

2 posted 2000-08-07 06:24 AM

hey !
A really strange poem !!!
and I LUV IT !!! I think the emotions you have just really show in this poem...and I think that is a great thing...cuz everyone can write something that rhymes, but it's hard to show real emotions...I think it's great !!!

greetz
-Robin-

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