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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Screams of worry frightened thy soul... Rages of anger burst with hate... Tears of sadness soaked thee floor... -Jessica DeMaio Years came... Years went... People came... People went... Days died... Days ... Eyes cried... Tears... Age grew... People soon saw through... The "happy Days" they say... Turned into... Reality...They all knew... Doors shut... My world crumbled in a day... Thoughts with no meaning... Dreams with no Life... Confused...Worrying... Scared... They all knew... That girl... The girl who always laughed... The girl who never backed down... Went to her home... Never knowing if her smile... That only lasted for a short while each day... ................. Would stay... A perfect girl they said... Who cried endless nights on the top of her bed... Time.......................... Years..................... Months............... Days.............. Pain. Everlasting... Gone... Memories will always be there... The past too... But life goes on... I learned this from you... Thank you… |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was a really nice poem with a good meaning.. I'm glad to read, and hope to see more... Love ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow...loved this! truely a great poem. i mean the simple words and phrases bring meaning to being lost. i guess i formed my own personaly meaning to your words through what i've seen from life. loved this...awesome post! salooma |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Yer style's a bit different than a lot fo stuff in here...I do like it. Keep up the great emotion....email me er somethin too. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
WHOOW !! that poem really rocks !!! it's just so original and stuff !! the subject is great too !!! I think it's the best I've seen here till now !!! I like the short phrases !! and you really can imagine things and think about it when U read it... it's fantastic !!! thanks..I hope to read more soon !! -Robin- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
beautiful poetry here... muchly enjoyed... My regards, sudhir |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
Yaay! Well expressed! I love it! |
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